Comments for Classmates

Ralph- The Temptation Record

Hey Ralph! I can connect in the fact that my grandparents also had a record player, I don't know what music they played but I do know they had one! Very well written, it clearly describes your passion. Nice Job!

Jennifer- A Little Treasure

Hi Jennifer! Much like in the story, I hungout on a baseball field a lot as a kid. It was my escape from all my problems and everyday life. This was very well written, I liked how it was partially made up but very truthful at the same time. Good work!

Sarah- The Little Dancing Bird

Hi Sarah! I related to the little girl in this story. Whenever she grew up, she broke out of her shell. This explains me once my grandfather unfortunately passed away and I broke away from some bad habits. Nice writing!