Tuesday, April 11, 2017

Children's Story Feedback



Page 1: Mike the stalagmite lived on the floor of a cave

Page 2: ? the stalactite lived on the ceiling of a the cave.

Page 3: Mike had friends to keep him company in the ceiling, and ? had no friends to keep her company on the cave floor.

Page 4: Mike and ? were lonely.

Page 5: They longed to talk to one another, but they were too far away.

Page 6: They little stalagmite and stalactite waited and waited to grow, so they could finally meet.

Page 7: After millions and millions of years Mike and ? were so close they could finally meet.

Page 8: And maybe they would each have a new friend.

Bailey this is a wonderful idea! I'm trying to help you think of names for the other stalagmites and tites but I cant think of one that rhymes fairly well together. However, this story is great! Where are you wanting to end up with it? I could see them meeting and becoming friends, that would be cute! Also, just another idea, if they meet and become friends they should try to see if they can friends around them as well! Awesome story!

Morgan does not have her story posted at this time






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